Photo Critique Forum

Please post no more than five images a day and respond to as many images as you post. Critics, please be constructive, specific, and nice! Moderated by gahspidy and mtbbrian.
Featured Photo
Photo by hminx

Photo by hminx
Featured Photo Archive >>
By posting on the Photo Critique forum you agree to post only your own photos, be respectful, and give back as much as you receive. This is a moderated forum and anything abusive or off-topic will be removed.
Results 1 to 7 of 7
  1. #1
    Member
    Join Date
    Sep 2005
    Location
    WDM, IA, USA
    Posts
    74

    Trip to the lake

    let me know what you think....

    (for the night shot, i didnt have a tripod, and had to use a table so please excuse the fuzzy look. i just thought it looked kinda cool)

    (and for the toddler picture, i couldnt get him to stop crying, so i thought "well maybe i should just take his picture instead)
    Attached Thumbnails Attached Thumbnails Trip to the lake-minnesota-08-042.jpg   Trip to the lake-minnesota-08-076.jpg   Trip to the lake-minnesota-08-211.jpg   Trip to the lake-minnesota-08-158.jpg  

  2. #2
    Senior Member
    Join Date
    Apr 2008
    Posts
    565

    Re: Trip to the lake

    Godfather,
    #1...love the colors, but you need to crop off (or clone out/blend) that vertical distraction on the right side. Nice shot.

    #2...flower looks out of focus, although your composition is good.

    #3...I don't like that you clipped the wingtips of the gull. Good capture, though.

    #4... I'm thinking the tears make this look a little soft. But then again my eyes ain't what they used to be.

    John
    PLEASE ASK BEFORE MAKING ANY EDITS. THANK YOU.

    If I care enough to leave a critique or comment on your work, please return the favor.

    My Aviation photos:
    http://picasaweb.google.com/addiesgranddaddy

    Everything else:
    http://www.flickr.com/photos/9367218@N03/

  3. #3
    GB1
    GB1 is offline
    Moderator GB1's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2004
    Location
    San Diego CA
    Posts
    9,960

    Re: Trip to the lake

    The bird is the best one here. Too bad his wings are clipped. The kid's eyes are OK too but too soft and maybe zoomed in too far. Time to get a vibration reduction lens if you can't carry a tripod.

    G
    Photography Software and Post Processing Forum Moderator. Visit here!

    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    Feel free to edit and repost my photos as part of your critique.
    -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

    My Site

  4. #4
    MB1
    MB1 is offline
    The Skeptical Photographer MB1's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2004
    Location
    Washington, DC and Clermont, FL
    Posts
    3,144

    Re: Trip to the lake

    The bird is the one for me too. I don't mind that the wing tips are out of the frame, I find it to be a fresh look at a familiar subject.
    No, I DON'T need that.

  5. #5
    Senior Member Dylan8i's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2006
    Location
    Yellowstone NP, USA
    Posts
    1,878

    Re: Trip to the lake

    i agree the gull with wings clipped, they don't bother me.
    check out my photography website
    http://dylanschneider.zenfolio.com/



    Please feel free to edit or change any of my pictures to show me how to improve them.



    Nikon D200
    Nikon D7000 w/grip
    Nikkor AF-S 18-135
    Nikkor AF-S 60mm macro 2.8
    Nikon 70-200 2.8 vr
    Nikon tc-17eII
    Kenoko extension tube set
    SB-600

  6. #6
    Member
    Join Date
    Sep 2005
    Location
    WDM, IA, USA
    Posts
    74

    Re: Trip to the lake

    thanks guys...

    GB1...i do have one, sadly it was all the way back inside (and i really didnt want to move)
    so i just sat it on a table and set the timer...

    addies: ha, i just started laughing when i read yours b/c your 100% right, i dont know what i was thinking :mad2:



    for some reason i love taking pictures of seagulls (even though they basically are rodents) i still like them. That bird was with all of his buddies about 100 yards off shore eating some fish that we just cleaned, and then 3 eagles came swooping in and the 15 or so seagulls flew away pretty quickly. (it was kinda funny watching 3 birds chase away 15)....

    All of these were taken in Northern Minnesota, which is probably my favorite place to be,, Great fishing, on hot days laying out, having a few beverages , swimming, and in my opinion one of the best areas for nature photography

  7. #7
    Member Dave Smith's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    Brandon, MS
    Posts
    301

    Re: Trip to the lake

    Well ,,,

    I love the eye shot. Shows so much emotion and feeling.
    And ... the blue is so awesome.

    Thanks for sharing these
    Dave

    Nikon D60 :thumbsup:
    Nikor 35 f 1.8 ... Nikor 18-200 f 3.5/5.6 ...Nikor 18-55 f 3.5/5.6 ... Nikor 55-200mm f 4.5/5.6
    Nikon SB-600 Flash

    Fujifilm FinePix S9000 - A Digicam ...
    Not a true DSLR but close enough :wink5:
    Promaster 5750DX Flash

    Nikon FG :thumbsup:
    Nikon 50mm f 1.8 ,,, Quantaray 28-80mm f 3.5-4.5 ... Quantaray 80-300mm F 5
    Nikon MD-E motor drive
    Nikon SB-15 Flash


Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •