MB1, I agree the first shot is hurt by the bars/grill in the view. It does not add but rather detracts and gives a busy feel. The second one is my favorite for the lighting and mood, but the composition is not feeling just right for me. I do not like how the dock/contrail? is coming into the scene. It somehow feels in the way. Either more of it included somehow or none at all. I think I need to see where it came from to feel good about it in the shot like this. The last one is very dramatic, but I think there is too much of either sky or water. As D stated, they are competing for attention, and also the horizon line is too close to center for me. I would crop off from the bottom to eliminate some of the water and bring the horizon down. The lighting and scenery, quality of the images are very good.




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