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Thread: Texas Farmhouse

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    Texas Farmhouse

    Took this photo on my way back from Lockhart,Tx It should actually be named Texas Barn because it is a Barn.
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    Re: Texas Farmhouse

    For me, this is terribly out of focus. If you want us to look at the barn as your main subject, it needs to have some semblance of focus or clarity. Was this shot from a moving car?
    The clouds are kinda neat.

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    Re: Texas Farmhouse

    I blurred it on purpose. I was playing around with a technique used by Jack Spencer in
    " An American House" . I was just curious what the response would be, I wasn't dissapointed.

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    Re: Texas Farmhouse

    Quote Originally Posted by Bobintx View Post
    I blurred it on purpose. I was playing around with a technique used by Jack Spencer in
    " An American House" . I was just curious what the response would be, I wasn't dissapointed.
    Understood.

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    Re: Texas Farmhouse

    Can kind of see what you're after but it isn't working for me...srry!
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    Re: Texas Farmhouse

    Thank You Frog

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    Re: Texas Farmhouse

    I am ok with processing, because it does make me think of those of old 30's shots which were done slightly out of focus and had that strange sepia look to them. If we look at it compositionally, the Barn is in the very center of the shot and the horizon is diving the photo in half. It would be better if the barn was to the side and the horizon followed the rule of thirds.

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