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Her expression could be really interesting, but she's a touch far way. The guy in front doesn't tell me much. Have you thought about cropping so we can see her better?
I agree with Lavalamp. The girl has an interesting expression and is the only piece of this pic that holds my attention. I assume you titled the shot referring to her relaxed moment, and if so, than it really needs to be about her as the ma9n subject and not just an addition in the bg. My feeling is that it does not look as though you put any thought into this pic
The girls perfect pose and brilliant fascial expression sums up the title. Not too sure about the inclusion of the other person. Is there a better photograph there without him I wonder?
Tom
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