Style Check?

[kyle]

This past Saturday was the opening round of the AMA Supercross Series at Angel Stadium. There was a lot of great racing/action going on. Here is a shot I got of Ryan Mills over the finish line jumping during the last practice session for the day. What do you think?

[CLKunst]

Hi Kyle,

As someone who has no clue about this kind of sport I will stick with what I see. I think the rider's pose is very dynamic and I like that I can read Rockstar on the seat of his pants.
I feel like there is too much sky and that it is undermining the height of air your rider has achieved. Beautiful sharpness and DOF, well done there. A crop just a leetle bit to bring down the ceiling is the only thing I would suggest.

Regards,

[swmdrayfan]

Agree with C.L. on the sky. Nice DOF though. Nice clear colors.

John