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    Stretch

    Another image from the session withe the dance students



    Comments or suggestions ?

    Thanks in advance

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    Re: Stretch

    Exquisite light on her face. Her body look both graceful (top half) and awkward (left leg) at the same time, which defines a dancer, perhaps.

    I think this classic photo cries out for black & white, or perhaps sepia and I would darken the top left shadows. Perhaps even add some vignetting.

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    Re: Stretch

    Thanks Lava

    I did notice her foot until I was processing the image ... wish it was aligned to her right leg

    I have already added some vignetting but kept it discrete, maybe add some more ?

    regarding b&W I tried and have not been able to obtain a conversion that I like

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    Re: Stretch

    Good. Contemplative expression, interesting lighting, and decent sharpness. A tighter crop though would give more of a personal feeling; try removing the area behind her and a bit off the top.

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    Re: Stretch

    Thank you Greg

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    Re: Stretch

    Beautiful. I like where the light hits her.

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    Re: Stretch

    the light gives another dimension. love the facial expression

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