Stretch

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  • 06-13-2014, 10:10 AM
    armando_m
    Stretch
    Another image from the session withe the dance students

    http://armando-m.smugmug.com/People/...10-1500-XL.jpg

    Comments or suggestions ?

    Thanks in advance
  • 06-14-2014, 07:25 AM
    Lava Lamp
    Re: Stretch
    Exquisite light on her face. Her body look both graceful (top half) and awkward (left leg) at the same time, which defines a dancer, perhaps.

    I think this classic photo cries out for black & white, or perhaps sepia and I would darken the top left shadows. Perhaps even add some vignetting.
  • 06-14-2014, 08:28 AM
    armando_m
    Re: Stretch
    Thanks Lava

    I did notice her foot until I was processing the image ... wish it was aligned to her right leg

    I have already added some vignetting but kept it discrete, maybe add some more ?

    regarding b&W I tried and have not been able to obtain a conversion that I like
  • 06-17-2014, 08:23 PM
    GB1
    Re: Stretch
    Good. Contemplative expression, interesting lighting, and decent sharpness. A tighter crop though would give more of a personal feeling; try removing the area behind her and a bit off the top.

    G
  • 06-18-2014, 10:31 AM
    armando_m
    Re: Stretch
    Thank you Greg
  • 07-10-2014, 08:08 AM
    DMG
    Re: Stretch
    Beautiful. I like where the light hits her. :)
  • 07-31-2014, 10:04 AM
    stoikos
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    the light gives another dimension. love the facial expression