N8,
The yellow doesn't bother me, but I think a sepia tone would work better. What slightly bothers me is the bright area on her left check that's a bit devoid of detail, but I think her eyes make up for it. Nice capture - have you considered a vignette? Here's an example. I also added a touch of orange. I think the shallow DOF and her eyes looking down like that has a Grapes of Wrath, Depression era feeling - a very good thing!
- GB




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