self portrait- another attempt.

[icicle]

Just wondering how this one works for all of you.


is there anything I could change?

Thank you for looking

[writer45]

pretty good lighting...did u use a fill flash? I might frame it tighter.

John

[icicle]

pretty good lighting...did u use a fill flash? I might frame it tighter.

John

Ya I only used the pop up flash on my camera.
What way would you tighten up?

[jetrim]

I like this better than the cowboy hat shot, though I agree that it could be zoomed in a bit. I think you could bring it in to the elbow (left) shoulder (right) and just above the belt line.

[Frog]

I like it and think you did good. Background areas washed out but I don't think its a problem with this shot as otherwise it might be distracting.

[icicle]

How's this?

too much above the belt line?

[jetrim]

NOPE! I like it!

[icicle]

Thank you.