• 10-11-2009, 04:26 PM
    icicle
    self portrait- another attempt.
    Just wondering how this one works for all of you.
    http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/n...s/IMG_0247.jpg

    is there anything I could change?

    Thank you for looking
  • 10-11-2009, 05:21 PM
    writer45
    Re: self portrait- another attempt.
    pretty good lighting...did u use a fill flash? I might frame it tighter.

    John
  • 10-11-2009, 05:24 PM
    icicle
    Re: self portrait- another attempt.
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by writer45
    pretty good lighting...did u use a fill flash? I might frame it tighter.

    John
    Ya I only used the pop up flash on my camera.
    What way would you tighten up?
  • 10-11-2009, 07:40 PM
    jetrim
    Re: self portrait- another attempt.
    I like this better than the cowboy hat shot, though I agree that it could be zoomed in a bit. I think you could bring it in to the elbow (left) shoulder (right) and just above the belt line.
  • 10-11-2009, 08:16 PM
    Frog
    Re: self portrait- another attempt.
    I like it and think you did good. Background areas washed out but I don't think its a problem with this shot as otherwise it might be distracting.
  • 10-11-2009, 08:20 PM
    icicle
    Re: self portrait- another attempt.
    How's this?
    http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/n...IMG_0247-2.jpg
    too much above the belt line?
  • 10-11-2009, 08:36 PM
    jetrim
    Re: self portrait- another attempt.
    NOPE! I like it!
  • 10-11-2009, 08:43 PM
    icicle
    Re: self portrait- another attempt.
    Thank you.