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Wtf? Ha ha.. just kidding Daq. This one has potential but is too undone as is. Your hand is fading right into the background there. Are you holding a 'weapon?' Can't even tell, but you may need to.
One thing - the lighting is too hot on your head. I know you're going for that strobe w/ no umbrella flash approach, but do you have an example or two of someone who can get the right lighting with one consistently? My pt is that it may be hard, if not impossible, to do... umbrella lights are just so much smoother. Anyway,
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Thanks for the input. I will cut the left leg off post haste.
But yeah. The composition was somewhat compelled by the fact that even thin old guys look like fat f**ks when kneeling down. Should not have tried the shot in the first place. Definitely should not have posted it.