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  1. 06-01-2007, 12:06 AM #1
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    Sean

    Too much cropped?

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  2. 06-01-2007, 02:53 AM #2
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    Re: Sean

    The composition is very good. If you shot this in RAW, I would try an adjust to bring his eyes out more.
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    Re: Sean

    I agree with the eyes but other than that nice work

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  4. 06-01-2007, 07:46 AM #4
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    Re: Sean

    maybe just a touch looser crop - maybe. Looks good as is - really like the shutter speed and how much it froze/blurred the water.
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  5. 06-01-2007, 09:23 PM #5
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    Re: Sean

    I am thinking this would be better with a border.

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  6. 06-01-2007, 10:04 PM #6
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    Re: Sean

    small black border, yeah. Something to seperate the sky and the bg of the forums. I think this is a great image though, and one of the best I've seen from you. good work!
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  7. 06-02-2007, 05:09 AM #7
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    Re: Sean

    How do you put a border on it?

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    Re: Sean

    resize canvas size, relative, select black as a color, then select a dimension. I usually use .1 inches.
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  9. 06-02-2007, 06:48 PM #9
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    Re: Sean

    Only nitpick here is the eyes, which I believe Greg touched upon. Get a little light in around the eyes, and you've got a winner Tyson.
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  10. 06-02-2007, 07:07 PM #10
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    Re: Sean

    I shot this on the go, we were at a real house fire. I did the best I could.

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  11. 06-03-2007, 06:38 AM #11
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    Re: Sean

    I adjusted the levels in PS.

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  12. 06-03-2007, 02:55 PM #12
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    Re: Sean

    Different for sure,

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