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    Red Flower & Dirty Window

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    Re: Red Flower & Dirty Window

    On the bottom part of the flower I see a blue outline. What is it and how can I get rid of it?

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    Re: Red Flower & Dirty Window

    It's probably chromatic abberation. You can probably fix it (or try) in the lens correction function in PS. Overall though, it appears to be pretty soft, and I don't think the lighting is helping. I do think that blurring the bg a bit would be helpful.
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    Re: Red Flower & Dirty Window

    Yep. Chromatic aberration likely. Better glass or hand paint it out is the only way I have fixed it. PS is set up to deal with certain kinds of common fringing, but usually cyan I think. The only time I ever had to fix major fringing I hand painted it out with PS.

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    Re: Red Flower & Dirty Window

    I wish there was separation between the flower and its reflection. now they melt together. the dirty glass doesn't bother so much, it makes it a somewhat grunchy shot. there's also a cyan cast over the entire image that takes away from the shot. try correcting it through the white balance if you shot this in raw.
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    Re: Red Flower & Dirty Window

    Thanks for the suggestions, I shall try them. Also its a second flower and not a reflection, if that means anything different. As far as the chromatic aberration, I can't blame the lens since its a canon 70-100mm f/4L. I thought it happened in the processing.

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    Re: Red Flower & Dirty Window

    That's a pretty good illusion Arne. Your image really makes the second flower look like a reflection in the mirror.
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    Re: Red Flower & Dirty Window

    haha, yeah looks like a perfect reflection.

    also, not sure if anyone mentioned it, but i just realized the thing on the left doesn't add to this shot.
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