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    photo gallery Mod. starriderrick's Avatar
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    Lightbulb Reaching for the light

    Something that caught my eye,was a quick grab.I liked the texture, contrasts. Critique welcomed. Thanks,

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    Re: Reaching for the light

    That's a good catch, composition good even though centered, the wood grain works too. Did you enhance the color? Increasing the shadow could be interesting?
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    Re: Reaching for the light

    Interesting shot! Nice, simple composition.

    Maybe it would look better if the vine were a little off to one side? But then, I think that this photo works as it is.:thumbsup:

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    Re: Reaching for the light

    I like it Rick. I agree it is little centered but well done.
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    Re: Reaching for the light

    Very nice as it is. I would prefer though to see more of the plant at the bottom, perhaps with a little soil. Very nice colours. Possibly a little oversharpened or is it very light grain?
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    Re: Reaching for the light

    Hi Rick,
    Very well spotted. I especially like the gradual change of size of the leaves. Well done!
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    Re: Reaching for the light

    Many thanks!
    Yes,I did enhance the saturation, applied unsharp mask,... I really appreciate all the encouraging feedback.
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