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    An expt. with a model (her idea).

    Nikon F100 with 24-120mm lens. The lens unfortunately produces distortion at every zoom setting
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    Re: Progress

    good idea, good comp. Good shot. Payphones are getting expensive eh? :P
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    Re: Progress

    I love the idea, the lighting just seems to be off for me. The colors don't really 'kick' for me. Great subject, just work on the colors.

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    Re: Progress

    Jared, funny that you say the colors are off.. they don't seem bad on my monitor here (other than the strange very little blue background).

    I think payphones will be gone pretty soon. I never see anyone using them anymore.. hence the idea for this photo!

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    Re: Progress

    Quote Originally Posted by GB1
    An expt. with a model (her idea).

    Nikon F100 with 24-120mm lens. The lens unfortunately produces distortion at every zoom setting
    Kinda cool and the woman rocks, but can you find a way to de-emphasise the payphone? It is bigger than she is and just as clear.

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    Re: Progress

    Quote Originally Posted by GB1
    Jared, funny that you say the colors are off.. they don't seem bad on my monitor here (other than the strange very little blue background).

    I think payphones will be gone pretty soon. I never see anyone using them anymore.. hence the idea for this photo!

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    GB,

    Probably my error then. My monitor isn't calibrated, and I notice that sometimes I'm the only one noticing the colors sometimes. That being said, I looked at this picture on another monitor I have upstairs, and the colors for me still seemed a tad washed out! But if there good on your monitor, don't mind me

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