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    Too square to be hip. almo's Avatar
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    A portrait... Any Thoughts?

    A shot from my second client shoot. I touched it up aome in PS. Any thoughts?

    almo
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    Re: A portrait... Any Thoughts?

    Quote Originally Posted by almo
    A shot from my second client shoot. I touched it up aome in PS. Any thoughts?

    almo
    I like that it is offbeat, but it's too anonymous, I think. Maybe if the eye on camera right was more visible...

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    Too square to be hip. almo's Avatar
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    Re: A portrait... Any Thoughts?

    Hey, thanks LL!

    Geez I posted this like almost a year ago...

    This is the first response lol...;)

    Here is a slight retread, and resize. To put some emphasis on the visible eye I gave it a touch of color. Something I would have been unable to do when I first posted this


    Last edited by almo; 12-20-2005 at 06:17 AM.
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    Re: A portrait... Any Thoughts?

    Wow, you must have bumped this from like page 50!

    The shots interesting, but not your best almo. You've definately grown leaps and bounds from it.

    Nice to bring up the past eh?

    Jared

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