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    Pier Reflections

    I'm having alot of fun shooting way out of my comfort zone.

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    Re: Pier Reflections

    Now, although I am way out of my comfort zone my thoughts on this are that there is a little that needs to be cropped from the left because of all the blank space under the pier? Am I correct?

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    Re: Pier Reflections

    I disagree, the full image looks fine to me.
    Everything leads to the subject, the end of the pier.
    Yes everything.
    By its triangular shape even that darkness under the pier.
    Then the blsck on the right and top stops the eye at the subject.
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    Re: Pier Reflections

    Alison, it looks like your comfort zone is getting wider.
    I think I would change the crop to eliminate some of the blackness after the pier. JMHO, of course.
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    Re: Pier Reflections

    I vote a little on right..play around with a little on top. ...not left.

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    Re: Pier Reflections

    alison, the reflections under the pier are very appealing and make a strong subject. i like the photo as is but also feel a crop could improve this. As john and jkriminger suggested, i would crop off the right (not completely eliminating the black space) and off the top enough to keep your original aspect ratio.
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    Re: Pier Reflections

    Hooray for leaving your comfort zone!! I really like the colors on the water. I agree with the cropping suggestions so far too.
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    Re: Pier Reflections

    Thank you so much everyone!!! :thumbsup:

    How does this look?

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    Re: Pier Reflections

    Very good. . .improved.
    Still enough darkness to compliment the reflections. Looks great.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


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    Re: Pier Reflections

    I think the final version is the best......welcome to the outside of your comfort zone.
    Keep Shooting!

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    Re: Pier Reflections

    Yay! Thank you so much everyone! You've been a great help!

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    Re: Pier Reflections

    The final crop is great. Those mixed up colors ar nice.

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