I can see what you were going after, but for me the photo doesn't retain my interest. Probably because of the repetition of flat shingles, and the fact that the bird isn't really doing anything dramatic but is just standing there.

However, as I looked at this it did bring to mind what would keep my interest...you know those spanish style tiles? The red, curved ones? I've seen where some small birds like to make their home in the last row. To get a picture of one peering out among the abstract pattern of the shingles I think would be kinda neat.