Old Glory

[IVAN ZEITLIN]

Back when the farm was the engine of our countries strength

[LeeIs]

to me, there are two parts of a photo. Colour and luminosity.

you get 1 out of two here ;-)

it needs better luminosity, meaning, darks and lights, also known as depth.

right now it's very flat.

[arne saknussen]

I agree with Liban. I also think that you didn't capture the flag at its best moment. It could be stronger if it was not so crumpled.

[IVAN ZEITLIN]

Thanks guys for the feedback. Leels I see what you mean I’ll rework it. Arne I wanted the weakness of the flag to tell the story of how our country is now, with farming out of the hands of the local farmer like it was back in the heyday of American glory days. But now is a broken down, and used piece of equipment.