NewB Here ! 2 pics to show.

[Tecknikal]

There ya go , im new at this and i have a ****ty cam , but i have to deal with it until i change it.

Any Help or comment for improving will be gladdy appreciate.

CAM : HP Photosmart 735
Setting : ISO 100 , Macro Mode..
Photoshop : Xfer to B/W , Unsharp Mask.
Pics might be really dark on some Monitor


This one i don't remember the setting of the cam , but i did clarify it and adjust a bit the color in PS ..


Thanks
Peace

[mtbbrian]

Welcome to PR.com!
I hope you learn as much as possible here, there are a lot of great photographers here!
I look forward to seeing more from you.
Good luck and keep shooting!
Brian

[Irish]

Two nice sharp images with totally differece subject.

I love No1. The detail of the sleaping kitten is great and I can just make out Mum watching in the background. The brighter white area to the top right of the photo is distracting and in need of some attention to remove.

I think the dampled light in the second image is well exposed but you have chopped of the legs of the young lady which I find distracting. I feel this image could be more effective if the person was be more along the road and part of the image rather than standing almost as an onlooker. Either come back a few feet or have your model walk along the raod.

[Tecknikal]

Thanks for the comment

Il'l work on my 1st shoot on the corner .. it is distracting like you said
But the 2nd one , we were doing Roller-Blade and my Gf didn't want to have her Roller-Blade in the picture ,so i had to chop it .. but im going but in those road today , il'l try some more shoot

[shesells]

Thanks for the comment

Il'l work on my 1st shoot on the corner .. it is distracting like you said
But the 2nd one , we were doing Roller-Blade and my Gf didn't want to have her Roller-Blade in the picture ,so i had to chop it .. but im going but in those road today , il'l try some more shoot

I think it would have ruled to have her roller-blades. Even better, her roller-blading. It's a great spot and nice lighting. The 1st is just plain adorable! 2 nice pics Teck
~ Kit