a new image for your eyes...

[stuntboy]

comments on this one please...

[IMG]http://**********/eleven_800.jpg[/IMG]

thanks
todd

[McMadCow]

This one is a toughie, Stuntboy. I really like the sharpness and the colors and the way those colors reflect on the surface. It's a toughie for me because I'm not really sure what the image does for me overall. It doesn't really tell a story or capture a particular moment or even instill a sense of mystery about its lack thereof and therefore it's missing something in my opinion. It should really be stressed that it's just my OPIONION, though, because like i said it is technically very nice. You've obviously got a good command of your camera. For me, it's just missing some kind of element that makes it a more successful and interesting image.

[jar_e]

Todd,

I love it. The simplicity, the colors, just perfect. One of my favourite shots of yours.

Jared

[stuntboy]

hey McMadCow thanks for the critique, i do agree not much is there and not much happening but i liked the colours so i went with it. i dont what kinda of other element i couldve added in. but thanks for the go over. all input helps me further my education.

todd

[stuntboy]

jared thank you...your critiques are always uplifting, and appreciated.

todd

[MTBsSd]

While the shot is nice, I think you could do a little more with it... good job though

[GB1]

Another kick butt photo that shows a unique view. I really like this type of look - contemporary and minimal, with soft colors.

The only thing that I don't care for too much is it seems that the objects are too centered. I took the liberty of a new crop (and also shrunk it a little). I think it looks a little better. I maintained the horizontal balance but placed the objects at approx the 1/3rd pt. What do you think?

GB

[Seb]

comments on this one please...


thanks
todd

Hello Tod,

Oddly, I'd mostly go against what McMadCow said and I would say that I like the picture for what it is but that I don't think that the excution (technically speaking) is optimal. To me the subject isn't as sharp as it should be. Of course, it is fairly good but I think that it could be better. Same goes for the colours. Now I guess that colours rendition is more subjective and the picture could stay like it is but I would make it a tad flashier.

As for the rest, this is solid work. I like how you make the surface looks so silky smooth as I have already said about another picture of your series.

regards

Seb

[stuntboy]

thank you for all the comments on this one...here is what i had left on the disc. i thought the first picture i posted here was the best, well heres 4 more from that day.

[IMG]http://**********/gum_shot.jpg[/IMG]

todd

[jar_e]

Todd,

Numbers three and four add an interesting depth and feel to the shot. I prefer those to your original, as it incorporates a larger depth and adds perspective.

Great simplistic shooting,

Jared

[stuntboy]

jared i also thought those might be better due to the depth of them...whos this one work for you people?

[IMG]http://**********/gum_10_800.jpg[/IMG]

todd

[shesells]

Todd.... It works fantastic! But then i love the first one best.. as soon as i opened the window i was expecting a doll or something and i said *YES outloud.. i would love it on my wall. gimmie!
Kit

[stuntboy]

thanks sheshells if you want the original here it is....

http://**********/eleven_max.jpg

todd

[Knight]

Good work , i love your photos StuntBoy keep them coming , looking forward to your next series

[stuntboy]

thanks alot Knight im glad to have my vision appreciated by you...

thank you
todd

[shesells]

omg thank you so much!! I'll try it out on my new printer.
very sweet of you!
Kit