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    Music

    Playing with lighting so to speak.
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    Re: Music

    I like it, but also see some 'picture within the picture'. Maybe also try playing with some cropping and working with the three black spaces as more of an abstract. - TF
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    Re: Music

    Nice! I would like to see a bit more at the top and could sacrifice some from the bottom to get it.
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    Re: Music

    thank you both i'll try another set.

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    Re: Music

    Really very creative, well done. Though maybe to late to mention but I'd like to see more contrast and the shine you usually have on a guitar from the resin coat of paint? or at least from the plastic protector. As it is the crop is good but also displaying some of the neck could be great. You did a terrific job though.
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