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    Re: Model shots

    I think you should have focus on her lovely face, especially to hide the fact that the set is way too busy, which is obviously very distracting. On the first shot, I don't like the way her hands look, they are not her best asset. The B&W is the best shot; you feel she is talking to you with those beautiful eyes.

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    Re: Model shots

    Quote Originally Posted by Charlietala
    I think you should have focus on her lovely face, especially to hide the fact that the set is way too busy, which is obviously very distracting. On the first shot, I don't like the way her hands look, they are not her best asset. The B&W is the best shot; you feel she is talking to you with those beautiful eyes.

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    Charlie - Yes, but that's quite limiting, is it not? Here I have a model in a busy but obviously diverse setting, so zooming in on her face for a portraiture just wouldn't seem to fit the occasion. I agree on her hands there. A lot of young and generally inexperienced models don't seem to know what to do with them in these type shots. I try to hand them a prop - a guitar, hat, etc - to hide that.

    The black and white does seem to work best. I think it minimizes the colorful distractions in the background, letting one focus more on her.
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