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    i want to be a butterfly the other Ruth's Avatar
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    Medium format

    Hello,

    This was taken last year for a uni assessment (media prodction till image unit), the title was unsual professions, it is one of a series. Taken with a Hasselblad, on Fujicrome Provia film daylight 400f (says so on the film box). I cant remember what lens though.

    The image needs cleaning up alot as there is dust and dirt on the transparency. It did have a blue cast which was removed.

    Comments all welcome

    Ruth
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    Good image...

    Good image.. I hope you got a good grade..
    I think there is a bit too much space on the bottom. I would probably crop it just below the elbow, so there isn't so much space below.
    I hope you continue to post here.
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    Thanks

    i thought maybe it needed cropping but i liked the film edging. i got 68%for it 2 marks off a 1st!

    Ruth

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