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    Landing

    Model : NIKON D80
    Orientation : left-hand side
    DateTime : 2009:08:02 09:31:19
    ExposureTime : 1/180Sec
    FNumber : F11,0
    ExposureProgram : Manual
    ISOSpeedRatings : 160
    ExposureBiasValue : EV-0,5
    MaxApertureValue : F3,5
    MeteringMode : Spot
    FocalLength : 90,00(mm)
    FocalLength(35mm) : 135(mm)
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    Re: Landing

    Nice Shot, however it seems a shade too warm for me, also might have cropped a little more off the bottom. a little over powering on the green.
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    Re: Landing

    Quote Originally Posted by icicle
    Nice Shot, however it seems a shade too warm for me, also might have cropped a little more off the bottom. a little over powering on the green.
    I did not want to cut the fund for failing to cut off the leaves. For the rest OK

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    Re: Landing

    I really enjoy the detail here. The Dof is also great. i reallly can't find anything that i can help in improving this. nicely done.
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    Re: Landing

    Very nice Franco!
    I understand why you did not crop bottom, but I think it would be OK to do it on this shot.

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    Re: Landing

    Quote Originally Posted by LeeIs
    I really enjoy the detail here. The Dof is also great. i reallly can't find anything that i can help in improving this. nicely done.
    thanks, you're very kind.

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    Re: Landing

    Quote Originally Posted by jetrim
    Very nice Franco!
    I understand why you did not crop bottom, but I think it would be OK to do it on this shot.
    Perhaps the best thing would be to cut a bit and clone the truncation.

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    Re: Landing

    I agree that a little of the bottom needs to be cropped off. I also see why it's good to see the stem though.

    Try doing what you said - crop, and clone.

    Very nice capture.

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    Re: Landing

    Quote Originally Posted by GB1
    I agree that a little of the bottom needs to be cropped off. I also see why it's good to see the stem though.

    Try doing what you said - crop, and clone.

    Very nice capture.

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    I tried a cut and a clone (fast).
    It should be better?
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    Re: Landing

    I like the shot a lot but think it could use a tighter crop, something like this, Jeff
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    Re: Landing

    Quote Originally Posted by Grandpaw
    I like the shot a lot but think it could use a tighter crop, something like this, Jeff
    I had thought such a cut, but did not want to trim the leafy green. OK, thanks anyway
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    Re: Landing

    I like the tighter crop that is an awesome shot! Very cool!

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    Re: Landing

    And I thought this photo looks familiar, I saw it here:
    http://www.photoforum.ru/photo/523474/index.en.html

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    Re: Landing

    Quote Originally Posted by Asmarlak
    And I thought this photo looks familiar, I saw it here:
    http://www.photoforum.ru/photo/523474/index.en.html

    yes, you are right. it is also here
    http://www.photo4u.org/viewcomment.p...499738#3499738
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    Re: Landing

    Quote Originally Posted by jfloody21
    I like the tighter crop that is an awesome shot! Very cool!
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