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    Key Bridge at Dawn

    Any thoughts on the composition?
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    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Key Bridge at Dawn

    The comp. is great.
    Try and lighten up on the blue in the railing it would as it makes it appear as though you edited it to that tone.
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    Re: Key Bridge at Dawn

    This picture is amazing, i really like the reflection on the water.

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    Re: Key Bridge at Dawn

    very nice MB..how do you feel about cropping out the left side to about the second building leaving aspect ratio

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    Re: Key Bridge at Dawn

    The railing does bug me somewhat. It is a very nice photo MB, but eyes keep wandering to the railing.
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    Re: Key Bridge at Dawn

    Pretty picture but, I would lose the railing on the left side. Everything else in the picture is pretty but the railing is --- in my most diplomatic manner --- I will just say, the railing ain't!

    I'd like to see a crop without the railing --- I think that would be "the shot."

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    Re: Key Bridge at Dawn

    I wouldn't crop this one as I wanted the railing in there. However, I took lots of shots without the railing, I'll see if one of those works......
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    Re: Key Bridge at Dawn

    Very nice depth to this MB. I enjoy the bridge on the right and how it leads me to cityscape. I also like the blue tones and the feel of this shot. I agree with others on the railing, but you've already addressed that.
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    Re: Key Bridge at Dawn

    composition :thumbsup: For me also the railing on left is OK
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    Re: Key Bridge at Dawn

    Lovely shot, but I prefer #2. The bike and railing on far left don't fit the shot for me. S
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    Re: Key Bridge at Dawn

    I prefer the colors, contrast and detail in this one much better than in version number two, Jeff

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    I don't know if this will make any since but the first one looks like a photograph and the second one looks like a snapshot to me. I think that if the railing is removed it would ruin this picture.
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