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    Starting to think outside of the box icicle's Avatar
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    Kalama River- Night Shoot

    So you think that taking pictures at night is completly a waste of time and effort, Well Thing and guess again.

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    Re: Kalama River- Night Shoot

    hello icicle, the closer FG is too distracting and really overwhelmes the rest of this shot. The rest of the shot is fine and i like the smoothness of the water at that shutter speed.
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    Re: Kalama River- Night Shoot

    Crop version

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    Re: Kalama River- Night Shoot

    I love shooting at night! No crowds and you're forced to slow down. I agree with Leels. The FG elements are distracting because they are so bright. Other than that, I like the image.

    How did you light this? Is it natural moon light or did you use an artificial light source?
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    Re: Kalama River- Night Shoot

    i love the smoothness of the water, but that bush is distracting, looks like you used on camera flash?
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    Re: Kalama River- Night Shoot

    no flash, just a coleman lantern behind me about 10 feet or so.

    And yes just moonlight.

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    Re: Kalama River- Night Shoot

    Good efforts, probably better results than mine would have been. But yes, the blown out foliage is distracting, the crop is better but you can still see a bit in the lower corner - may be salvageable if you do some careful cloning though.
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    Re: Kalama River- Night Shoot

    Update:I'm going to be entering my picture tomorrow.
    I had it matted today and enlargend to a 11x14 print.
    I may not make it in to the top three, But sure hope I do.

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