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    Kabir

    "Model","NIKON D80"
    "ExposureTime","1/500Sec"
    "FNumber","F8,0"
    "ExposureProgram","Aperture Priority"
    "ISOSpeedRatings","125"
    "ExposureBiasValue","EV-0,5"
    "MaxApertureValue","F5,7"
    "MeteringMode","Spot"
    "FocalLength","135,00(mm)"
    "ExposureMode","Auto"
    "WhiteBalance","Auto"
    "DigitalZoomRatio","1/1"
    "FocalLength(35mm)","202(mm)"
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    Re: Kabir

    Nice stop action. I like seeing the drops around him. It might be better if it was taken from his level rather than looking down on him. Then again, you might just get a wet camera. :0 TF
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    Re: Kabir

    Quote Originally Posted by OldClicker
    Nice stop action. I like seeing the drops around him. It might be better if it was taken from his level rather than looking down on him. Then again, you might just get a wet camera. :0 TF
    You're right. If I went into the water, perhaps the photo was better, but I joined for 2 reasons. 1 because I have not the diving reflex, 2 because I was in high mountains and the water was really cold. Seriously thank you for the appreciation of my shooting.
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    Re: Kabir

    This is great! I am so envious of the clarity you have here! Good timing and the coloring is very striking
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    Re: Kabir

    Great colour contrast and it's clear that the dog is enjoying life to the full (unless someone just threw him / her into the water ) My only criticism would be that it would look better from a slightly lower angle and the dog's rear leg looks a bit out of focus / blurred.

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    Re: Kabir

    Thanks for your opinions. For Kisu, Kabir is a male. For the viewpoint you are right, maybe if I knelt the picture was better but I risked getting wet and the water was really cold. We were in the mountains in the Dolomites (S. Pellegrino) and the stream flowed from a glacier. Given the time of exposure perhaps the hind leg is slightly blurred
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    Re: Kabir

    Nicely done, and very little evidence of where you surely masked off the dog and desaturated the background. Nice action catch.

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    Re: Kabir

    Quote Originally Posted by GB1
    Nicely done, and very little evidence of where you surely masked off the dog and desaturated the background. Nice action catch.

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    Exactly, I did a partial desaturation leaving color only Kabir.
    Although the cold water truly was a sight to see him play.
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