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    Incased Beauty

    While not taking pictures of fish last Saturday I actually took some photos of butterflies. This is one of my favorites. Let me know what you think.
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    Re: Incased Beauty

    very nice!! I like it

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    Re: Incased Beauty

    I would crop off about half of the empty space above the butterfly.This will move the butterfly up some and keep it from being in the center. You might try adding a little contrast and sharpening, great photo, Jeff
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    Re: Incased Beauty

    Truly beautiful

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    Re: Incased Beauty

    Thanks Armando, daq7 and Grandpaw. I appreciate your comments.

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    Re: Incased Beauty

    The softness works here. I like the colors and am glad to see that you were able to get this shot off. He would have flown on me

    I agree that the composition could use a little work. I am not sure exactly what to do, though. I guess I would go about it by cropping in, taking a look, then cropping more, taking a look .. until you get a creative viewpoint. I might also clone out that stem behind and above him, which sort of detracts.

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    Re: Incased Beauty

    GB1, I'll give your suggestion a try and see how that looks. Thank you for the input.

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    I like Grandpaw's crop suggestion. Beautiful! The stem doesn't bother me at all.
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    Re: Incased Beauty

    Thanks Shebang.

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    Re: Incased Beauty

    Excellent.

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    Re: Incased Beauty

    Thank you draymorton.

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