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Thread: I See Light

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    I See Light

    Taken in an abandoned wing of a lunatic asylum


    I See Light by vmlopes, on Flickr
    Canon 1DmkIII, 24-105L, 17-40L, 50mm f/1.8

    I choose to live my life to a different tune of music., one which is not censored or wrapped so much with a blanket of over -regulation, Health & Safety gone mad, fear and blind compliance to anything you are told to do...........
    Downfallen, RIP

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    Re: I See Light

    All the lines work really well here. The amount of softness seems apropos as well. A good study of a place of abandonment.

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    Re: I See Light

    Love the Asylum shots you are producing. This one is great and the last one was spectacular.

    Pretty good for a guy who lives in a asylum

    db

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    Re: I See Light

    Lunatic fringe. . .love the softness/dreamy quality and the subject of the foliage coming in through the window is great.
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    Re: I See Light

    Thanks fellas............righto after many requests and PM's I am going to lay down some tutorials.............where is the best place to post them to?
    Canon 1DmkIII, 24-105L, 17-40L, 50mm f/1.8

    I choose to live my life to a different tune of music., one which is not censored or wrapped so much with a blanket of over -regulation, Health & Safety gone mad, fear and blind compliance to anything you are told to do...........
    Downfallen, RIP

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    Re: I See Light

    Quote Originally Posted by vmlopes
    Thanks fellas............righto after many requests and PM's I am going to lay down some tutorials.............where is the best place to post them to?
    You can post them here and then I'll redirect it to the Help Forum so the link will be here for those who have contacted you. In other words, it'll be in two places at once. . .
    please do not edit and repost my photos


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    Re: I See Light

    Awesome shot. I am thinking another element about two thirds the way into the shot would have helped. But great as is...
    I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..

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    Re: I See Light

    This is a beautiful image. Really fine! You have a way of bringing the story right into your photographs. I love the title - fits perfectly. The image to me looks like it is symbolic of light and darkness, despair and hope - and even life and death.

    I always enjoy your series.

    Liz

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    Re: I See Light

    Quote Originally Posted by gahspidy
    You can post them here and then I'll redirect it to the Help Forum so the link will be here for those who have contacted you. In other words, it'll be in two places at once. . .
    Gary, had already posted them in the post processing thread :mad2: but here are the links

    Part 1 My Workflow Part 1

    Part 2 My Workflow Part 2

    and how to create those light rays Light Rays My Way
    Canon 1DmkIII, 24-105L, 17-40L, 50mm f/1.8

    I choose to live my life to a different tune of music., one which is not censored or wrapped so much with a blanket of over -regulation, Health & Safety gone mad, fear and blind compliance to anything you are told to do...........
    Downfallen, RIP

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