I like it, yet something's missing

[kemekal_d300]

i think that if u had a guy standing with a mid-sized suitcase or even large backpack on the ground right to the left of his feet, standing facing away from the cam, maybe somewhat close to the edge to the right of where the 4th pillar is... with both hand clasped behind his head looking down the tracks as if trying to see as far as possible to see if anything was coming - Anticipation

hope i described this well enough - it looks good in my mind.

i went with a midsized, definitely not large, or just book bag, because this station doesnt look like a big popular track that people would wait to be going cross country with a bunch of luggage at - its all on you though -

hope this gives you something to consider - nice picture though, i like this

[IndyRick]

Thanks, everyone, for the thoughts on this one. I'm going to try several different things with folks, suitcases, steamer trunks...we'll see what happens!