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"I thought that because fewer wolves meant more deer, that no wolves would mean hunters' paradise. But after seeing the green fire die, I sensed that neither the wolf nor the mountain agreed with such a view."
Aldo Leopold
I like the subject, I like the frame up. I feel a bit more dof would help. looks like you shot this wide open, or zoomed in from far away. I notice that while the front edge of the roof is sharp, the front "wall" with the opening is starting to lose focus and it's only inches beyond the focal point. I would have liked to see more in sharp focus, especially some of the snow towrds the front. And had there been a bird evident inside, well. . .say no more. good eye and subject though.
I now know why I kept coming back to this photo and not understanding what was wrong. Its the DOF.
I do like the subject and the colours are great its just the DOF.
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"I thought that because fewer wolves meant more deer, that no wolves would mean hunters' paradise. But after seeing the green fire die, I sensed that neither the wolf nor the mountain agreed with such a view."
Aldo Leopold
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