Here's one more from the Graveyard

[IndyRick]

Here's one more, I posted "Angel in the Mourning" earlier today, and really appreciate all the suggestions I have on it.

This one I'm undecided if I want to shoot it again with a fuzzy background or like it the way it is.

I'll probably do it again just so I can compare the two.

Anyway, any comments, suggestions, criticisms are more than welcome!

[Frog]

For me the bright sky isn't working...I almost want to shield my eyes just to look at it.
Other than that I do like it. Less depth of field might work better here too. No harm giving it a try.

[MB1]

Yes, that sky is nasty.

Still, I like your point of view in this one. I'm thinking if you don't want to re-shoot you could crop from the right all the way to the headstone and from the top down to almost touch the edge of the frame with its head.

[IndyRick]

Thanks for the advice!!! I've been working on this one most of the evening and am getting ready to post another edit of it.

I REALLY like this forum!

[GB1]

I think the background sharpness is fine. The subject is interesting, the photo is well composed. Like the others have noted though, the background is just too bright (looks like an H bomb is exploding back there ). If you shot this at a different time of the day, that would take care of that.

-GB