• 03-17-2008, 03:56 PM
    IndyRick
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    Here's one more from the Graveyard
    Here's one more, I posted "Angel in the Mourning" earlier today, and really appreciate all the suggestions I have on it.

    This one I'm undecided if I want to shoot it again with a fuzzy background or like it the way it is.

    I'll probably do it again just so I can compare the two.

    Anyway, any comments, suggestions, criticisms are more than welcome!
  • 03-17-2008, 05:24 PM
    Frog
    Re: Here's one more from the Graveyard
    For me the bright sky isn't working...I almost want to shield my eyes just to look at it.
    Other than that I do like it. Less depth of field might work better here too. No harm giving it a try.
  • 03-17-2008, 05:58 PM
    MB1
    Re: Here's one more from the Graveyard
    Yes, that sky is nasty.

    Still, I like your point of view in this one. I'm thinking if you don't want to re-shoot you could crop from the right all the way to the headstone and from the top down to almost touch the edge of the frame with its head.
  • 03-18-2008, 03:10 AM
    IndyRick
    Re: Here's one more from the Graveyard
    Thanks for the advice!!! I've been working on this one most of the evening and am getting ready to post another edit of it.

    I REALLY like this forum! :)
  • 03-20-2008, 09:57 AM
    GB1
    Re: Here's one more from the Graveyard
    I think the background sharpness is fine. The subject is interesting, the photo is well composed. Like the others have noted though, the background is just too bright (looks like an H bomb is exploding back there :) ). If you shot this at a different time of the day, that would take care of that.

    -GB