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    GoldMember Lava Lamp's Avatar
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    Haven't Posted in a Looong Time...

    Haven't shot that much lately, but did take this one yesterday of my son with a Nikon D70 and 35mm 2.0 lens and SB800 bounced off the ceiling. Please share your comments and suggestions for improvement.
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    Re: Haven't Posted in a Looong Time...

    Good shot . Good lighting from that bounce. I like how you made the wood floor the bg. All I can say is maybe up the brightness a bit as it is just a bit dull in illumination to me. Great to see you back.
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    Re: Haven't Posted in a Looong Time...

    Very nice shot. Wood floors make excellent backdrops.
    I also would up the contrast/darken it. It's a little flat.
    Shooting down can almost always result in a nice shot.
    There's something about his position though, that bothers me. Can't put my finger on it. I think the way he is leaning.
    Lighting is soft and even.
    Jon

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