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    Junior Member Veej's Avatar
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    The Greatest Poem

    Give your thoughts.. I edited it in jasc paintshop..used my Casio digital camera...

    In case the text can't be read cause the size...

    The text on the first pic with leafs is:

    The greatest poem ever known
    Is one all poets have outgrown:
    The poetry, innate, untold,
    Of being only four years old.

    The Second Pic text is:
    There are many things in life that will capture your eye, but very few will capture your heart. These are the ones to pursue. These are the ones worth keeping
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    Last edited by Veej; 03-10-2005 at 01:14 PM.
    Our generation has had no Great Depression, no Great War. Our war is spiritual. Our depression is our lives.

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    Re: The Greatest Poem

    I like the idea, reminds me of william blakes poems set to 'lluminations'

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    Re: The Greatest Poem

    Hey Veej,

    I'm not into image manipulations, but like what you've done.

    I really like the first image but would do more to bring in the boy's head.

    I think the second image stands on its own without the brush layer on top.

    Welcome to this board,
    Tim

    ps. I use PSP too.
    Samurai #17 |;^\

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    Re: The Greatest Poem

    Quote Originally Posted by OldSchool
    Hey Veej,

    I'm not into image manipulations, but like what you've done.

    I really like the first image but would do more to bring in the boy's head.

    I think the second image stands on its own without the brush layer on top.

    Welcome to this board,
    Tim

    ps. I use PSP too.
    Thanks for your kind words...
    Our generation has had no Great Depression, no Great War. Our war is spiritual. Our depression is our lives.

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