The Greatest Poem

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  • 03-10-2005, 12:34 PM
    Veej
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    The Greatest Poem
    Give your thoughts.. I edited it in jasc paintshop..used my Casio digital camera...

    In case the text can't be read cause the size...

    The text on the first pic with leafs is:

    The greatest poem ever known
    Is one all poets have outgrown:
    The poetry, innate, untold,
    Of being only four years old.

    The Second Pic text is:
    There are many things in life that will capture your eye, but very few will capture your heart. These are the ones to pursue. These are the ones worth keeping
  • 03-10-2005, 12:49 PM
    LauriePriest
    Re: The Greatest Poem
    I like the idea, reminds me of william blakes poems set to 'lluminations'
  • 03-10-2005, 02:31 PM
    OldSchool
    Re: The Greatest Poem
    Hey Veej,

    I'm not into image manipulations, but like what you've done.

    I really like the first image but would do more to bring in the boy's head.

    I think the second image stands on its own without the brush layer on top.

    Welcome to this board,
    Tim

    ps. I use PSP too.
  • 03-10-2005, 05:14 PM
    Veej
    Re: The Greatest Poem
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by OldSchool
    Hey Veej,

    I'm not into image manipulations, but like what you've done.

    I really like the first image but would do more to bring in the boy's head.

    I think the second image stands on its own without the brush layer on top.

    Welcome to this board,
    Tim

    ps. I use PSP too.

    Thanks for your kind words...