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Last edited by mtbbrian; 04-17-2006 at 11:09 AM.
Reason: UN - Sticking As Featured Photo For 10 April 2006
Shooting B&W with:
a Yashica 635, 120 roll - 80mm Yashinon lens and an Agfa Billy 0 (Zero) 127 roll - Solinar 7.5cm lens
Shooting color with:
a Yashica-Mat, 120 roll - 80mm Lumaxar lens and a Canon FTb, 135 roll - 55mm and 85mm FD lenses
Nice late/early diffused light for the colors and drama in the clouds - but I think the square format of your Yashica may have done better to allow more at the bottom to balance this one out.
I did not have the 6x6 then and I was traveling light. I was actually in route in a taxi when I had him stop. It was snap n go ... wish I had more time but business called.
Thanks for the input.
Keltic aka Tom
Shooting B&W with:
a Yashica 635, 120 roll - 80mm Yashinon lens and an Agfa Billy 0 (Zero) 127 roll - Solinar 7.5cm lens
Shooting color with:
a Yashica-Mat, 120 roll - 80mm Lumaxar lens and a Canon FTb, 135 roll - 55mm and 85mm FD lenses
I like the light first off!
It only enhances the color of the building, plus it it constrasts very well against the dark blue of the sky.
I like how you put the trees in the foreground it gives a little scale, but it would have been nice to see a bit more of the building.
Thanks for posting this!
Welcome to PR.com by the way!
Brian
“A great photograph is one that fully expresses what one feels, in the deepest sense, about what is being photographed, and is, thereby, a true manifestation of what one feels about life in its entirety...” - Ansel Adams
The lighting brings the mosque out strong from the sky. the clouds add a good bit of tension. I agree with Tuna about bring a little more bottom into the scene, but the overall composition looks fine and well balanced to me. It also would have been nice to not have that tree in the middle blocking the building, but still a pleasing image. good work
Trees in front of the Grand Mosque - the Grand Mosque is about 250 yards end-to-end so if I would have gone inside the trees which suround the G. M. a 19mm fish eye would have only captured a small percentage of the building and the towers would have been pointing to 10 and 2 not to 12.
Shooting B&W with:
a Yashica 635, 120 roll - 80mm Yashinon lens and an Agfa Billy 0 (Zero) 127 roll - Solinar 7.5cm lens
Shooting color with:
a Yashica-Mat, 120 roll - 80mm Lumaxar lens and a Canon FTb, 135 roll - 55mm and 85mm FD lenses
Nice shot, Tom, and welcome. It would have been nice to have had a little more on the bottom, but a pretty good capture for what you had at the time. The lighting is just right and brings out the colors of the mosque really well. The deep blue of the sky contrast nicely. I think the trees add to it because that is not something I would think you would see much of over there.
Now if I can talk my nephew into taking a trip over there, I might check it out myself.
"No man has the right to dictate what other men should perceive, create or produce, but all should be encouraged to reveal themselves, their perceptions and emotions, and to build confidence in the creative spirit." --Ansel Adams
"Sometimes I do get to places just when God's ready to have somebody click the shutter." --Ansel Adams
The best word I can think of to describe this shot is "Majestic"! Really a fantastic image! The only things that bothers me are the dark spots in the sky around the left tower. They might be birds, but at this distance it is hard to tell that from flaws in the image.
Congrats on the sticky! Really great shot, especially for a "Stop the cab!" shot!
Marty in Central Illinois - The Land of Corn and Flatness!
Right you are ... 'tis birds above the towers. Thanks for your review.
Tom
Keltic Knot
Shooting B&W with:
a Yashica 635, 120 roll - 80mm Yashinon lens and an Agfa Billy 0 (Zero) 127 roll - Solinar 7.5cm lens
Shooting color with:
a Yashica-Mat, 120 roll - 80mm Lumaxar lens and a Canon FTb, 135 roll - 55mm and 85mm FD lenses