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Top shot's twist is cute. But the bottom shot's DOF and sharpness is the best. I think I wuld have given it a tad more DOF to get the shoulders and arms even more in focus, but the out-of-focus colors behind her,... They're just great.
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Top shot's twist is cute. But the bottom shot's DOF and sharpness is the best. I think I wuld have given it a tad more DOF to get the shoulders and arms even more in focus, but the out-of-focus colors behind her,... They're just great.
Gb
Thank you GB.
And there was me thinking everyone was going to say that the pink flowers behind her was just too much with her outfit.
Not at all too much, IMO. I printed some photos yesterday from a local studio photographer (yes he uses Wal-Mart, and yes his clients are very happy, lol) ANYWAY, his shots were of a lil bit younger girl, she was crawling in the grass, and he had spread pink rose petals aroun her (she was wearing pink also), and with the green I was blown away. Much as I am by many of your portraits.
The eye sockets and area around the eyes need a little brightening and the colour balance seems to lean a little toward magenta, perhaps due to an enhancement filter or Photoshop?
Maybe just sharpen the eyes a bit and then it won't seem so out-of-focus (well, at least to me)
Oh... the color scheme works well 'cause with the background matching her dress so much it doesn't compete (which with that color it could easily) and her face becomes more noticable.