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    Fungus

    Heh...fungus is more eye-catching than mushroom or toadstool anyhow.
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    Re: Fungus

    Yummy, let's eat!

    BTW I hope the thing isn't poisonous.

    BTW2 Nice colors, contrast and crop. I am not sure if I would like a little more depth of field or not.

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    Re: Fungus

    Lol...I'm not sure on the poisonous part...I didn't get as up close and personal as one would think, looking at this...hehe.
    Thanks for your comments on this...I wondered what people would say about the DOF.
    Emily

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    Re: Fungus

    Hi Emily,

    I really like this shot. I also like your recent leaf submission.

    One thing that I think would improve both (and especially this one) is using a greater depth of field (DOF) by stopping down the aperture (f-stop). Doing this would have a lot more in focus. However as you go to a higher f-stop, shutter speed slows. You may need to use a tripod.

    I’d suggest using a tripod for many of these still-lifes. The sharper focus and greater DOF would just put them over the top.

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    Re: Fungus

    I like this one a lot too. I thought the same about the DOF but then when I envision it, I think I may like it best the way you shot it.

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    Re: Fungus

    Emily,

    I'm with Tim on this one. You are really doing well with these macro pictures but I think the use of a tripod and a greater depth of field is all your missing from these. As a busy mom personally I know, 'Who has time for a tripod?' But for macro work this is pretty much essential. As for the composition I would like to see more cap and stem, less grass. Keep going though! You're doing great!

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