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    Freight Train

    Minolta X370 film SLR with 135 mm and 2x extender
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    Re: Freight Train

    Quote Originally Posted by Don Schaeffer
    Minolta X370 film SLR with 135 mm and 2x extender
    Wow! A little post processing there, Don?
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    Re: Freight Train

    Don - Interesting, but too over processed for me. I do find the format of the image quite different.

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    Re: Freight Train

    Thanks guys. It is a bit impressionistic. I use a "painting" filter to flatten it.

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    Re: Freight Train

    I like it, it is an interesting look and an appropriate use of post processing. Did you plan this look when you took the shot or decide to do it while fooling around later?

    If anything were to change I would like to see more foreground because I like the color and vertical lines of the grass in the field in front of the train tracks.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Freight Train

    Thanks MB. I saw it looking like a wall.

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    Re: Freight Train

    Quote Originally Posted by Don Schaeffer
    Thanks MB. I saw it looking like a wall.
    I'm liking all the vertical lines which I think a bit more grass would add to. I do like it as is, just suggesting what you might do if you were going to make changes.
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Freight Train

    This has a good look to it Don and you have meddled to great effect. The feature of all the poles disappearing into the distance is outstanding as is the colouring; all making for a very interesting image. The two triangles of grass and sky are great too. If this were mine it would be on the wall.
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    Re: Freight Train

    Feel free to print it Grumpy.

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