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    First try at panning !

    Hi ,

    This is my first try with the panning technique .
    Please feel free to criticise as much as you can , and please tell me also what i can do to get a better photo using the panning technique .

    Thankx

    james
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    Re: First try at panning !

    Pretty good job. The shadow is a little distracting. If you had waited until your subject was out of the shadow I think it would have been better.

    shane

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    Re: First try at panning !

    Looks good from here. Did you try any slower shutter speeds?

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    Re: First try at panning !

    hehe, well it definitely worked, ill try and pull up my faveourite panning image to show you a great example of it. I feel that a more direct shot of the bike approaching you while panning would capture the motion alot more.

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    Re: First try at panning !

    I think this is a great first attempt at panning. the backgroud is slightly blurred, the subjects face is in focus, you can't see the spokes and you see a bit a blur in the foot cause by the pedaling... Now just play with the shutter speed a little more... and different angles... Also if you work with your DOF you can get the backgroud even more blurred..

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    Have your model wear a helmet...

    He he he. Ok, sorry.

    Looks good. As Chunk suggests, have you tried a longer shutter?
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    Re: Have your model wear a helmet...

    Thank you for your comments ,

    I did not play much with the shutter speed . Will do so next time . I will try a bit slower shutter speed as well .

    Thanks for all your comments and suggestions

    Regards
    james

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