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    Firework Photography

    Fireworks I make
    and take pictures of
    (http://www.photopaintball.com)
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    Re: Firework Photography

    Quote Originally Posted by noahyay
    Fireworks I make
    and take pictures of
    (http://www.photopaintball.com)
    Maybe zoom in or crop to show more detail. Welcome to the board.

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    Re: Firework Photography

    Agreed, crop it and concentrate on illumicating the interesting looking pattern of pebbles surrounding your subject, I really like the colours and the few specs of orange in the rising plume of smoke.

    Welcome to the forum!

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    Re: Firework Photography

    Much to the general wave of the group, I wouldn't crop.

    If possible, I'd give it more room...work simplistically. Just having a small glowing light off centred (rule of thirds) with a little light on the pebbles, would work perfect IMO.

    Nice shot and welcome to the boards,

    Jared

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    Re: Firework Photography

    I'm with Jared on this crop up to a centimeter off the smoke on the right to off centre the firework and it makes it a better photo. I would prefer more room around the firework.

    roger
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    Re: Firework Photography

    Nice shot Noah. I like the smoke patterns and the frozen sparks. Care to share the technical details? My fire shots turn out very poorly compared to this.
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    Re: Firework Photography

    The white area seems awfully blown out.

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