Fire Engine

[speedracer 36]

This is a shot a got a few months ago, I decided to try my hand again at the editing. Can you tell what I did or if i did anything to this picture? then also I would love to have any comments and input about this picture.

[arne saknussen]

It's a nice shot, good color and sharp. You might want to clone out the restroom sign though.

[OldClicker]

I think you might pick either one subject or the other instead of part of both. - Terry

[speedracer 36]

Here is a newer version of it, is this one better? also does she look over edited at all?

[hminx]

Hard to tell what your main subject is, girl or fire engine, both have bits cut off. A wider shot may have helped here.

[speedracer 36]

is this more what you had in mind? (with the wider shot?)

[hminx]

Yeah, thats better, just a pity about that chap in the background

[speedracer 36]

do you think its possible to take that part from the first photo and edit it into the 2nd one? just to get the guy out of the shot?

[GB1]

A lot of good things in the photo, but shots like this can be hard to get compositionally right. As Old Clicker said, you have to choose which thing to emphasize. I really like the red color.

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[speedracer 36]

Does it look like I did any work to her skin? as in making her more tan?