Fire Engine

This is a shot a got a few months ago, I decided to try my hand again at the editing. Can you tell what I did or if i did anything to this picture? then also I would love to have any comments and input about this picture.

It's a nice shot, good color and sharp. You might want to clone out the restroom sign though.

I think you might pick either one subject or the other instead of part of both. - Terry

Here is a newer version of it, is this one better? also does she look over edited at all?

Hard to tell what your main subject is, girl or fire engine, both have bits cut off. A wider shot may have helped here.

is this more what you had in mind? (with the wider shot?)

Yeah, thats better, just a pity about that chap in the background

do you think its possible to take that part from the first photo and edit it into the 2nd one? just to get the guy out of the shot?

A lot of good things in the photo, but shots like this can be hard to get compositionally right. As Old Clicker said, you have to choose which thing to emphasize. I really like the red color.

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Does it look like I did any work to her skin? as in making her more tan?