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    fall reflection

    I cropped the actual trees out. leaving only the reflection and stone wall at the top--what I thought was the most interesting part of the shot. Did I crop too much?
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    uncropped original

    Quote Originally Posted by davef
    I cropped the actual trees out. leaving only the reflection and stone wall at the top--what I thought was the most interesting part of the shot. Did I crop too much?
    Taken with a Canon Digital Rebel, handheld, Canon 28-135mm at 135.
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    Re: uncropped original

    Quote Originally Posted by davef
    Taken with a Canon Digital Rebel, handheld, Canon 28-135mm at 135.
    I think the crop is a little too severe placing the point of attention right at the edge. If you are aiming for that kind of tension its OK. I like a crop about halfway between the waterline and the top of the original. While I like the reflection, I don't think that most people will dwell on that as there are too many things (sharpness, contrast, brightness - probably more) that draw the eye to the rocks and waterline.

    Beatiful photo however you end up with it.

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    Re: uncropped original

    I prefer the original, uncropped version. Nice strong colours, although the white rocks are a bit too white.

    As Chunk said, nice photo anyway.

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    Thanks...

    ...for the comments. Yeah, the more I look at the cropped version the more I see how the top edge becomes the focus, not the blurred colors as I'd thought. The rocks are quite bright, aren't they? I may try and correct that in ps....Thanks for commenting!

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    Re: fall reflection

    I like the original. Maybe you should take some spray paint to the rocks. (Don't worry, it comes off).
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    Re: fall reflection

    beautiful shots. I miss these scenes out in S. Cali.

    I like the balanced shot better. Maybe a little wider angle to get more in would make it even better?

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    Re: uncropped original

    Wow, I like the original a lot. The vibrant colors and the wonderful blurred reflection really make it, imho. The crop isn't bad, but I don't think it can compete with the full frame version.

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    Re: fall reflection

    Quote Originally Posted by davef
    I cropped the actual trees out. leaving only the reflection and stone wall at the top--what I thought was the most interesting part of the shot. Did I crop too much?
    That's a beauty! Maybe a longer exposure would have defined better the shape of the trees in the reflection...

    This reminds me of one of Rod Planck pic. Have a look at his Landscape gallery at http://www.rodplanck.com/rpp_gal_land.htm

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    Re: fall reflection

    very cool picture
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    Re: uncropped original

    I definatly like the original best, great colors and balance.

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    Re: fall reflection

    Nicely done...the original shot is by far more interesting and a better composition.
    I really do like the reflection, its just cropped a bit too much for my taste. If I was playing around with the shot, I may crop the just reflection and flip it around. and behold, a water color painting ;)

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    Re: fall reflection

    davef... Now that's one heck of a shot you took. Those colors just pop out at you. I agree that the original is way better. Your first pic is nice but too drastic and after seeing the real thing, it doesnt even compare. Keep it like you shot it is my advice. It's just wonderful like it is.Thanks for sharing it.
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    Re: fall reflection

    can you tell me what aperture, exposure you used? Did you do any postprocessing?
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    Re: fall reflection

    I'm not really the guy who likes formal balance all that much
    I wouldnt crop so that trees take half, water takes half.
    Try different things and compare. Make some 60-40, 70-30, etc

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