factory II (second try)

[mtb'n ski]

Here is the second attepmt at this shot. This time I tryed a style more similar to the first factory shot ("factory" thread) than the second factory shot ("factory II" thread) . Any comments would be great.

Thanks,
Scott

[Overbeyond]

You are trying out interesting things here. I think this one is just too busy and all the cable lines offer more confusion than required.
I like what you are doing.
Tom

[Herriot]

I like it, I agree that the wires make it a very busy picture but it works well with the bold statement in the bottom right hand corner, it is an unsettling image for sure.

[Seb]

Here is the second attepmt at this shot. This time I tryed a style more similar to the first factory shot ("factory" thread) than the second factory shot ("factory II" thread) . Any comments would be great.

Thanks,
Scott

Scott,

I think that this is an excellent piece of work. The cables does not distract me here (possibly because the stop sign draw my attention in the lower part of the frame and also because I think that the said cables create an interesting pattern).

I like your post processing. The colours are neat.

Seb