No problem Roger. I don't mind at all. I like to hear all critique.
I am begining to rethink this one also. It's just so different.
I think my "graphic design" background just totally interfered with my "learning photography" self on this one.

Now that I look at it, maybe it's a design thing than an actual photo treatement. What I mean it's the sorta thing a graphic designer would do to a photo to rework it in a layout or something like and not how an actual photo should look.