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    Disheveled

    Taken last summer. This is part of an old railroad building downtown. I had it on the computer, and only recently started playing with it.
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    Re: Disheveled

    Love the subject, but I feel the comp is too tight and cramped. I think you were trying to isolate this piece of the pie from other areas that you did not want to include, but in doing so it just became too cramped.
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    Re: Disheveled

    For some reason when i look at the window reflection it makes me lose focus on the building. I like the details you can see in the wood.

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    Re: Disheveled

    Gary, you're correct........the crop was a bit cramped. I will go back and redo later on.
    Themage, that's an interesting point. Perhaps I'll do one just of the door. Thanks.
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