Disheveled

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  • 07-11-2008, 04:44 AM
    Addies Granddaddy
    Disheveled
    Taken last summer. This is part of an old railroad building downtown. I had it on the computer, and only recently started playing with it.
    John
    http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b1...Settled-In.jpg
  • 07-11-2008, 08:30 AM
    gahspidy
    Re: Disheveled
    Love the subject, but I feel the comp is too tight and cramped. I think you were trying to isolate this piece of the pie from other areas that you did not want to include, but in doing so it just became too cramped.
  • 07-11-2008, 10:18 AM
    Themage
    Re: Disheveled
    For some reason when i look at the window reflection it makes me lose focus on the building. I like the details you can see in the wood.
  • 07-11-2008, 11:17 AM
    Addies Granddaddy
    Re: Disheveled
    Gary, you're correct........the crop was a bit cramped. I will go back and redo later on.
    Themage, that's an interesting point. Perhaps I'll do one just of the door. Thanks.